When they get to the stairs, there’s somehow a river with alligators in them. You have to keep up with the illustrations to see what’s happening to the stuff they were carrying the rope, the stick, and the light, because it doesn’t tell what happens to it in the story. Because they had come that far, they weren’t going to stop there. When asked if they’ll over the great sleeping bear, it recaps with how they went into the tree, climbed the stairs, went through the wall, into the hall, so of course they were going over the bear. The first cute thing was how it went from one shivering bear, to two, and you knew it would eventually be all three. If they were putting emphasis on it, it should have been italicized. There are a couple underlined words that didn’t make sense to underline. It also makes you read in a robotic voice, which isn't pleasant. They dare.’ Like will they go in the spooky tree, up the stairs, through the wall, down the hall, over the bear? And it’s all answered with yes, they dare. The questions throughout is always answered with ‘yes. The three bears start out with rope, a stick, and a light. There was one line that rhymed, wall and hall, yet nothing else rhymed.
It wasn’t pleasant to read because of the simple writing, and it didn’t have the humor and charm that a lot of their books have. This was overly simple, and not one of their better ones. Sometimes it’s wordier, and reads like a regular story, some are rhyming, has humor, and is really cute. It amazes me how their style of writing changes.
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